and the winner is

        Yasutomi's

He tried to erase the dark picture an artist drew from his mind. That makes me depressed . English level: 5    Originality:  3   Words:  +1   Mistakes:  0   Bonus:  +1   Total:  10   A teacher："Please sketch a colorful flower with a pencil on this paper." A student："With pencil?? Are you serious?? " A teacher："Yes,I am. If you don't do this, You can't go back home."  English level:  6   Originality:  4  Words:  +1   Mistakes: -2    Bonus:  +2   Total:   11      

machiko's 

I sketched an animal with the striped pattern with a pencil like an artist to paper  English level:  3    Originality:  4   Words:   +2  Mistakes:  -5   Bonus:  +2   Total:   6    

Hiro's  He is a very handsome man.but his secret hobby is putting on a flower pattern paper diaper(nappy) which is painted by himself.   English level:  4   Originality: 7    Words:  -1   Mistakes: -5    Bonus: +3    Total:   8                           (+1 for friendly introduction)  total 9 Because she didn't have a red color.she thrusted a pencil into her nose,and she painted red spotty pattern on the paper. English level:  3   Originality:  6   Words:  +1   Mistakes: -4    Bonus: +2    Total:   8    

         Kaori's

⑴ If I can erase with a eraser, I want to erase his dark mind. English level:  4   Originality:  6   Words:  0   Mistakes:  -1   Bonus:  +2   Total:   11 ⑵ I painted his lips light red and colorful eye shadow while he was sleeping. And he became shemale. English level:  5   Originality:  6   Words:  0   Mistakes:  -2   Bonus:  +3   Total:    12 Thank you for entering this contest. You all tried very hard and after many hours of intense checking and thinking the final scores have been decided and the winner is  Kaori. 

Congratulations!